I Have Made The Rulebook!!!

[yudencow]

Hi, I followed Cyrus's advice and created the rulebook.

http://www.scribd.com/doc/67608745/Rulebook-Edition-Zero

please comment and tell me what to keep, change and remove.

[Himalayas]

I like the diagrams, they are very clear and concise. I would like to constructively criticize you a little bit though, you use words to describe victory conditions like "basically" this implies to me there are other methods to win the game that I am not aware of. I would be very clear what it takes to win the game in the rules. I was not able to finish all the rules due to time constraint unfortunately, but I just wanted to leave you some notes to look at. Looks like a good starting point so far and keep up the good work!

[yudencow]

Thank you Himalayas.

It is listed there in the victory condition that the Frame card may add a victory condition that usually overrides the existing ones.

For Example: the Frame Card has added a victory condition "Capture the Flag": Players must invade into the enemy playmat to take the flag (located at each player in closest right corner) and take it to their pedestal (same place as the flag). A card can't move more than one space with it. They can't change spaces in the formation step in the Set Phase with it. First player to collect 3 enemy Flags wins (if in multyplayer, you may capture flags of several players). Basic Victory Conditions are Overidden.

I will make it more clear, and be more thorough on the Frame card, and add a new chapter about the unique victory condition Ark Age.

Please tell me what you think once you finish reading it. Your constructive sriticism is really constructing.

[Himalayas]

Ok I've finished reading it, and I thought it a very good start. Your concept is definitely unique and interesting. I like a lot of your ideas of game play as well. After reading it I felt it was a little choppy and uncoordinated; but on the upside to that it conveyed your rules very clearly. I think before you continue with rules you should create a few example cards so readers of the rules can get a picture of the different types of cards and how they will interact with each other. This is all just my personal opinion/preference/and ideas. I hope other forum members will comment as well to help you. Great start and I can't wait to see the next step!

[Himalayas]

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[yudencow]

Thanks. I'll get on making some tamplates. My next project is to give each faction a personality using the keywords so hopefully i could realeas V0.1 soon with a few other surprises.